butt your such a fool!
Listen to my advice go to school
Its a diss to insult me in my own thread
Remember to capitalize your i to I do it right and you get a piece of bread!
When I say to leave you leave
Don't make me get love on your butt Whats that? Your name's Steve?
Oh yeah boy What now?!?
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lookie here, shodow and buttman in a lovers quarell
over some poorly formed lyrics - so what's the moral?
both o' y'all need to be schooled on how to wordsmith
and then proceed hand in hand in your relationship
the fangs on your dog are a front - you'd never diss
and buttman says bring it on, but he's really askin for a kiss
you're once, you're twice, you're three times a lady
you can even compete so dont try to hate me
or blame me
or play me
or even come around latley
now the way that i see it you got two choices here
kiss and make up or lend me an ear
while i put on a show for this audience
and demonstrate what it means to rap with intelligence
Pah whats this peace of crap?
I dont even know if its a real rap
you can rap like the master
cause I could do it faster
My raps are better so try again
I have to admit you not the worst so get in a band
beware since your here
Lets throw a party and have some beer
drop me off at the bar
go get me a bucket of tar
take me away from here
I just a deer
dude I just destroyed you!
you can't just write garbage and call it "destroy"
sit right down and let me show you little boy
a battle means you form thoughts into a lyrical diss
not just some meaningless rhymes and a call for a win
the only crap in here is yours and it ain't tight
now take the "real" tp, bend over and wipe!
***throws roll of tp at shodow and drops mic on the floor - that's how you"destroy"
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I agree with Hammer but thats not why im here
When i step on that stage i dont expect to hear cheers
i only come here so i can show off my skills
Shadow you need some practice ill send you my bill
Hammer your legit and i can respect that
but this is my time to get up to bat
I hit all the pitches that the other rapers miss
Now i end this verse with a big ol diss
hahaha just fun dont mean to affend dont make it all personal
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lets pick this apart line by line
i'll show what it means to put flow in your ryhme
this is too easy - it's not even fun
the line is "stick a fork in it, cause you're already done"
rip off Nelly, it's getting hot in here
you're like 13 - you've never even cracked a beer
evena photographic memory, your raps will forget
here's your towel showdow, now wipe up this $%#t
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like vader to luke, the absentee father
i try to lead by example, but why even bother?
just because words rhyme doesn't mean a rap is good
y'all are lucky you're not rappin to get out of the hood
your two-bit lines are nothing short of amatuer
the definite mark of the wise fool, for sure
hardly the sophomore, and clearly not precocious
you're Mary Poppins and I'm SUPERCALIFRAGILISTICEXPIALIDOCIOUS
Dude your lost in your own words
Better get a map to open those doors
You act like your four
Your big Hore (Changed spelling)
Your full of blood and gore
I got a hard core
Rap like me
And earn yourself a cup of tea
My nickname Starts wih the letter z
Pay me back my money CA-CHING!
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