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Hit it freestyle yall
doesn't matter how tall
take someone out with your awesome raps
who cares how long just dont leave any gaps.
 

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The lyrics I used were from, Eminem, 50 Cent and Lil wayne.

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Your not welcome here then. You have to make up your own lyrics. Love just said that.

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Not lyrics, I mean like names of songs or a WORD from a song i listen to....Suck it up princess magic...

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butt your such a fool!
Listen to my advice go to school
Its a diss to insult me in my own thread
Remember to capitalize your i to I do it right and you get a piece of bread!
When I say to leave you leave
Don't make me get love on your butt Whats that? Your name's Steve?
Oh yeah boy What now?!?

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Now leave.

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A fresh new post for "Now leave" makes a strong statement. XD

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True that homey but at least I did not diss him!

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Diss me and see what happens.....:D

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OMG get out!

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lookie here, shodow and buttman in a lovers quarell
over some poorly formed lyrics - so what's the moral?
both o' y'all need to be schooled on how to wordsmith
and then proceed hand in hand in your relationship
the fangs on your dog are a front - you'd never diss
and buttman says bring it on, but he's really askin for a kiss
you're once, you're twice, you're three times a lady
you can even compete so dont try to hate me
or blame me
or play me
or even come around latley
now the way that i see it you got two choices here
kiss and make up or lend me an ear
while i put on a show for this audience
and demonstrate what it means to rap with intelligence

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Pah whats this peace of crap?
I dont even know if its a real rap
you can rap like the master
cause I could do it faster
My raps are better so try again
I have to admit you not the worst so get in a band
beware since your here
Lets throw a party and have some beer
drop me off at the bar
go get me a bucket of tar
take me away from here
I just a deer
dude I just destroyed you!

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you can't just write garbage and call it "destroy"
sit right down and let me show you little boy
a battle means you form thoughts into a lyrical diss
not just some meaningless rhymes and a call for a win
the only crap in here is yours and it ain't tight
now take the "real" tp, bend over and wipe!

***throws roll of tp at shodow and drops mic on the floor - that's how you"destroy"

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I agree with Hammer but thats not why im here
When i step on that stage i dont expect to hear cheers
i only come here so i can show off my skills
Shadow you need some practice ill send you my bill
Hammer your legit and i can respect that
but this is my time to get up to bat
I hit all the pitches that the other rapers miss
Now i end this verse with a big ol diss

hahaha just fun dont mean to affend dont make it all personal

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Super
Duper
This is really fun
Your rhymes Suck like your already done
Its gettin hot up in here
I got no water so might aswell get a cold beer
I am going to make a rap you wont forget
So get a towel you might cry a little bit

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:)

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lets pick this apart line by line
i'll show what it means to put flow in your ryhme

super duper
pooper scooper
this is too easy - it's not even fun
the line is "stick a fork in it, cause you're already done"
rip off Nelly, it's getting hot in here
you're like 13 - you've never even cracked a beer
evena photographic memory, your raps will forget
here's your towel showdow, now wipe up this $%#t

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I am 14 how do you know if I never had a beer?
I had wine and I shot a deer
poison in the air go to sleep
come in in take a ride in my jeep
*Drops the towel*
I aint pickin up $#!%

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You look like ham and spageti
chicken in yo belly
dang you is smelly
just killed of yo family
aw now you getin tany
just stand up and fan me

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Rhyme??
I will give you a dime
Come back inside
Its past your bedtime
Dont try to hide
lets battle oh no we just tied

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like vader to luke, the absentee father
i try to lead by example, but why even bother?
just because words rhyme doesn't mean a rap is good
y'all are lucky you're not rappin to get out of the hood
your two-bit lines are nothing short of amatuer
the definite mark of the wise fool, for sure
hardly the sophomore, and clearly not precocious
you're Mary Poppins and I'm SUPERCALIFRAGILISTICEXPIALIDOCIOUS

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The words are clear professional better than yours
Yours just talks about a bunch of Boars
You have to tame it before you post it
even if it might suck a little bit
Listen to this lesson
and you could master profession

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i've said too many times, no need to reiterate
what type of formation it takes rap to be great
my lines are superior no need to hate
it's like you're showin up to the party a little too late
no need to berate
or act the ingrate
or i'll be forced to put this dog in his crate

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Dude your lost in your own words
Better get a map to open those doors
You act like your four
Your big Hore (Changed spelling)
Your full of blood and gore
I got a hard core
Rap like me
And earn yourself a cup of tea
My nickname Starts wih the letter z
Pay me back my money CA-CHING!

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look at you dude
you think your rude
your just like a piece of stake
which i take and spit it out
please shout " os "
don't get me started rapping is my game
your lines are so lame
i get girls i drink beer and i eat a lot
you can come with me to the spot

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I am not rude I just like competition
I have talent and I am a musician
Rapping is my thing
My alarm go ding!
I am rapping about everything
So man that was fun
Yeas I know I am done.
 
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