| | I'm a Loony Toon thats worse than Bugs Bunny/
you could catch me buzzed like a bee around ya honey/
people who tried to mess wit me are straight up dummys/
and these rappers aint comedians but they wack drops are funny/
and ayo I'll never crank a Supaman cos I never bought a comic/
everytime I get sick with my raps I'll make you vomit/
I'm a lyricist|| watch out cos all the queers get hit/
them dudes doin' stunts on that Fear Factor show is fearin' this/
so get Sonic and nuckle up|| I love girls wit bubble buts/
I aint R.Kelly but the kid gotta double up/
peace... |
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| | My grandma was talkin' in her sleep last night, and her rhymes were smoother than yours.
LOL, Kidding.
I'm not much of a lyricist or anythin'... But I "think" raps should have unity and revolve around some topic instead of throwin' some random lines out there.
Nice rap though, just refine it a bit.
And again, I don't have to be taken seriously, I'm not one who hangs out in the Freestyle forum. |
| | Loony bottom line your a rhyme taker
Let me be clear homeys a faker
Stealin some bars is all good and fine
But takin a whole verse is crossing the line
I normally shred suckers like you but instead....
Nah who am I kiddin im still gonna verbally stomp your head
Pickin someons lines apart definetly aint smart
I'll use you to whipe a wet fart so your playin your part
Next time your able remember dont steal someone elses fable
I'm going to bury you in this box i made outta your own kitchen table
You'd like someone to give you an opinion of your rhymes
Your stolen words go on deaf ears like a cryin mime
I spit so much fire your ash's are incinerated
someone else step up cause this kids obliterated |
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| | look at me in the king,
yall know what im sayin i know yall can see,
if ya can't den ya blind, then u don't know where 2 grind, yea i said it spread the word, but im one of da best rappaz ya herds, top 3 round here are me kid wayne and lil wayne, we been doin this for a while we in the same game, go head ya kno ya lost, but overall IM DA BOSS!!!! |
| | i agree wit spaz, you stole that verse |
| | hey!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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| | let me show you a lil lesson on street
im the type of raper that never missed a beat
step up to me and youll be feeling the heat
i have more sting then you in one of my feet
so you best sit down and take a seat
loony make up your own stuff dont be takeing credit
and good rap Spaz much props |
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| | as ali stated flow like a butterfly sting like a bee,
im nice at rapin call me double o g.
i spit more fire then a dragon,
i get more girls then alladin.
step to me and ill knock you out,
have you on the floor cryin with out a doubt.
not all my raps rhyme i dont care, yo girlfriend told you still sleep wit a teddy bear. |
| | that was to noone i just like to rap |
| | you might be trying to diss but in fact you should be full of fright
i wanted to give you a little time in the light
but its time i show you a real lyrical fight
you think your all cool cuz you think you can rhym
but in fact when i was reading this i felt like it was a wast of my time
rhyms like these need to be put to rest
cuz your words dont even come close to the best
that was a good one though i liked it much respect |
| | that was just me foolin around,
diss at me and ill knock you down.
no disrespect but yo last six lines was shabe,
my raps vs. you is like a lexis racin a cady.
i stole the spot light no one can have it back,
in my room count my thousnd stack.
i gets my money,i get my cash,
if rapin was in ranks you be in last. |
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| | you got it all twised your stacking my money in blocks
you just like one of my maids just doing what your told to stay in the flock
i dont step up 2 you if i where to be at your level i would have to lay down
now you try to talk smak just refer to my crown
and if you still want to tango better get ready for your face to meet the ground |
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| | alright man good go much props comeing your way keep up the good raping |
| | thx but latley ive been of my game i need help |
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| | I be spittin my rhymes in da blink of an eye
trust me hommie wat i do is illegal
if u see me walkin on da street u betta hope i aint got my 9 or desert eagle cuz home boy there aint no sequel to yo life they call me the beast 4 a reason cuz i more deadly then any deadly weapon man so if u got beef wit me u betta stay in yo house cuz if u dont u momma goin to get a gift and itz gonna b da cops wit yo body |
| | ok im be spittin my flow
all you haters should know
that im comin out the best
im beter than all the rest
cuz im the king i wear the crown
start off on yo block then take yo town
i got the muscles got the pecs
you better watch yo mouth cuz i write yo checks
i'll have you on the floor better yet the concrete
im sittin on my thron have you haters bowin to my feet |
| | ur just mad cuz:
im of the scene
bristene an im not a teen
so cuz watch ur back
b4 ur going down
with a frown
like a little sad clown
an thats mi word so watch ur mouth
or ur gonna make me pull mi angry eyes
word |
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| | its so funny you got that from disney channel rap toy story 1 and 2 the liitle big show |
| | now let me show you how a player can flow
dude you rap like an avarge joe
now watch a great me drop my hit
when this battle done you'll have a fit
im a beast im the best you cant see me
like a said you got you rap from tv |
| | hey, baby im a female
so let me read you this email
you give me pleasure
when u say im ur treasure
you say its your delight
when you think about me late at night
so just give me golg before i turn cold
baby dont cry just reply |
| | Im the altergut ,Dont step to me you stupid sl*t,
Everyone thinks they can talk all this crap
without any dap,of all the raps son!
You suck
I'll hit you in da face with a pile or muck
All ya cowards mad
Because Altergut took ya girl now ya sad! |
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